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LeopoldTheBrave
Artist / Voice Actor looking to practice and share my talents here! Slowly but surely working on my webcomic "Stardust Story"

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Stardust Story - UPDATE #3

Posted by LeopoldTheBrave - 8 hours ago


Feedback wanted!!!

So, Stardust Story has been coming along great! Currently working on Chapter 6 which is turning out to be one of my favorites! But I'm also a little worried! The previous chapter is the lowest rated one so far! By an entire star pretty much! So, I'd like to know what you guys liked and didn't like about it, and what you think I could do better in future chapters! Did you not like that Vic was the focus of that chapter instead of Star? Did you not like how episodic or "filler" it may have possibly seemed? Or perhaps the pacing was off. A LOT does happen in it. I struggled to fit it into 3 pages! Should I allow these to go beyond 3 pages if the story really demands it?


So yeah! Let me know your thoughts! Read Chapter 5 here!


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